Monday, January 30, 2017

Comments

Hi Chad! I think your story is very well written. It reminds me of when my grandpa was passing away, and we had to pack up some of his things. I really like how you ended the story! It ties everything together nicely. I can't wait to read your next piece.

Hi Georgia! I loved this story. I also used to have a childhood treasure growing up. It was a doll, but she was always with me. One time her leg fell off and it took everything in me to give it to my mom to let her sew the leg back on!


Hi Winter! I think this story is really good. I loved the hope that the little girl carried throughout the entire story! I look forward to reading more of your work.


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